Hey @aaron_jamal,
We're gonna review your track 'On my name draft #2'. Let's get it!
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little.
We like the bars, well written!
Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
Good choice of beat! πΌ
Your bars are dope and we can really hear the effort put into this rap. You just need to work on the flow a bit more as you're off beat a few times in the track!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @aaron_jamal, We're gonna review your track 'On my name draft #2'. Let's get it! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. We like the bars, well written! Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π Good choice of beat! πΌ Your bars are dope and we can really hear the effort put into this rap. You just need to work on the flow a bit more as you're off beat a few times in the track! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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