OnThePain#23kp
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•08 Mar 2022
bout to go prime to the top i climb didnt have a nickle or dime now i got my ryhmes i focus on my pain i remember everything standing in the rain tears of my the soul lord help obtain my goals help me find a wife in this newfound life every breath i take every move i make every time i pray i be thinking of you gave me strength when i was weak started off poor then you gave me more gave me more than i could ask for no longer a pawn in the game i dont wont no fame if jesus anit with me i got scars were the devil bit me but they hurt no no more no no no more i will never sale my soulllllllll........but forever obtain my goals i know my role bout to go prime to the top i climb didnt have a nickle or dime now i got my ryhmes i focus on my pain i remember everything standing in the rain tears of my the soul lord help obtain my goals help me find a wife in this newfound life every breath i take every move i make every time i pray i be thinking of you gave me strength when i was weak started off poor then you gave me more gave me more than i could ask for no longer a pawn in the game i dont wont no fame if jesus anit with me i got scars were the devil bit me but they hurt no no more no no no more i will never sale my soulllllllll........but forever obtain my goals i know my role
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💯🔥💯 nicely done
Hey @trentonthorpe.6932601, We're gonna review your track 'OnThePain#23kp'. Let's get it! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
bout to go prime to the top i climb didnt have a nickle or dime now i got my ryhmes i focus on my pain i remember everything standing in the rain tears of my the soul lord help obtain my goals help me find a wife in this newfound life every breath i take every move i make every time i pray i be thinking of you gave me strength when i was weak started off poor then you gave me more gave me more than i could ask for no longer a pawn in the game i dont wont no fame if jesus anit with me i got scars were the devil bit me but they hurt no no more no no no more i will never sale my soulllllllll........but forever obtain my goals i know my role bout to go prime to the top i climb didnt have a nickle or dime now i got my ryhmes i focus on my pain i remember everything standing in the rain tears of my the soul lord help obtain my goals help me find a wife in this newfound life every breath i take every move i make every time i pray i be thinking of you gave me strength when i was weak started off poor then you gave me more gave me more than i could ask for no longer a pawn in the game i dont wont no fame if jesus anit with me i got scars were the devil bit me but they hurt no no more no no no more i will never sale my soulllllllll........but forever obtain my goals i know my role
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