Hey @aiden_is_depressed,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Don't go my girlfriend's bed are don't beat up my sister'! 💥
Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏
The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording.
Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills!
You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @aiden_is_depressed, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Don't go my girlfriend's bed are don't beat up my sister'! 💥 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills! You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎