Dark Days

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Lyrics- gonna have to strive to give all thats inside cause I'm like a land mine. could explode at anytime. as sour as a lime. but always spitting dimes. born spitting rhymes. but I gotta thank my dark times. cause if It weren't for all the difficult days if it weren't for all the things that made me wanna change my ways all the days I use to pray but God never had anything to say. so i lost grace and gained space for the faces that helped me face it. the dark time can't break shit. cause the only one to allow it. is the person going through the breakin. so never be mistaken. this life is yours for the takin. do what you must, fake it till you make it just never give up, even if the light fadin keep going with the bullets even if they're penetratin, when hope is disintegratin. and your heart is racin. know you can make it. it's the difficult things that are eye opening. and honestly that's something most aren't understanding. do what need be only you can make yourself happy. So rely on yourself. work with your health.

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Tren Taylor (Iron Lungs)

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4 years ago

🪬9elevin🪬

4 years ago

This ain’t it tren 🗑

FRIDAY GOODISH™

4 years ago

few parts you gotta shave a few syllables off to make it smoother, but you got the passion, that's the main thing. Always try and keep your syllable count the same when the snare hits and that will keep you on the right track. When you transition off the word on the snare, use another rhyme from that scheme at the beginning of your next to make the transition smooth to begin your next set of rhymes. hope this makes sense, and cheers.

Dtaylz The Profit

4 years ago

Ay bro you got passion and energy and that’s key , gonna give you some feedback

Herazz

4 years ago

work with ur health is some real shit,

JHawk

4 years ago

good job brother! 👏

Caiin

4 years ago

Great quality and structure...