With out a tracev#23kp

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With out a tracev#23kp

was out of place but gods grace free me when i saw his face gone without a trace the position im in is nothing like the vision im in mellow as gets the master of my own seal always play the hand im delt im all around like a belt shut up you dont no what i felt or how i deal pills from the doc can only take you so far what you going do with your back agaisnt the wall stand tall above all shine bright like a star ill see you on the other side rip grandpal it took time to realize i needed to be wise stay in the behive i love you axle more then life it self sorry for not always being around promise i always be there for now on was out of place. then gods grace free me when i saw his face gone without a trace the position im in is nothing like the vision im in mellow as gets im the master of my own seal always play the hand im delt im all around like a belt keep it down you dont no what i feel or how i deal pills from the doc can only take you so far what you going do with your back agaisnt the wall stand tall above all shine bright like a star ill see you on the other side it took time to realize i needed to be wise keep my son in the behive i love you axle more then life it self sorry for not always being around promise i always be there for now on my little pawn

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4 years ago

was out of place but gods grace free me when i saw his face gone without a trace the position im in is nothing like the vision im in mellow as gets the master of my own seal always play the hand im delt im all around like a belt shut up you dont no what i felt or how i deal pills from the doc can only take you so far what you going do with your back agaisnt the wall stand tall above all shine bright like a star ill see you on the other side rip grandpal it took time to realize i needed to be wise stay in the behive i love you axle more then life it self sorry for not always being around promise i always be there for now on was out of place. then gods grace free me when i saw his face gone without a trace the position im in is nothing like the vision im in mellow as gets im the master of my own seal always play the hand im delt im all around like a belt keep it down you dont no what i feel or how i deal pills from the doc can only take you so far what you going do with your back agaisnt the wall stand tall above all shine bright like a star ill see you on the other side it took time to realize i needed to be wise keep my son in the behive i love you axle more then life it self sorry for not always being around promise i always be there for now on my little pawn

4 years ago

Hey @trentonthorpe.6922291, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'With out a tracev#23kp'! 💥 You got great bars here. 🙌 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. 👍 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Great beat choice, really works with the track! The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. This track really makes the listener feel something. 💜 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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