breath for the moment, frtyle

Scruggs

Author

4 years ago

yeah breath for a moment*10 lettin it go rockin the boat fixen to choke killin these shows ready too blow tying the roap doin the most created a flow off of a da dome wont leave me alone chillin too know this wht i chose yeah this is wht i fuckin chose cant nock me outta my zone you phony, you is a clone im beastin this mode yeah i walk with the ghost im the most perfect of host i got coke up my nose and i cant feal my face, i escape from my pain i can feel it in my vaines and ik wht a shame but who can you blame now im seeing shit tht dont make no sence im stuck, trapped in cement

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @scruggs, Here's some feedback on your track 'breath for the moment, frtyle', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Maybe try our Masterclasses, to help fine tune your skills! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎