No Peace #rap #firsttake #hiphop
When your past is still present then there can’t be a future Just because you ain’t winnin don’t mean you’re a fuckin loser Life will beat you up, it’s known as the abuser start the fuckin marchin, a modern day Luther If you can’t run then walk, can’t walk then crawl People are always talk, divided amongst us all Together we will rise, divided we shall fall Til hate leaves our minds keep that piece on our sides The great thief’s at night, peep that piece down it’s sights People are so selfish and that’s just human nature Life is a bitch, she just mad cause I played her Wanna tie the knot but what’s a piece of paper Dancin with the devil while he ask me for a favor 13 years of riches then it’s off to meet my savior I said lifes a bitch but now I’m tryna save her
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When your past is still present then there can’t be a future Just because you ain’t winnin don’t mean you’re a fuckin loser Life will beat you up, it’s known as the abuser start the fuckin marchin, a modern day Luther If you can’t run then walk, can’t walk then crawl People are always talk, divided amongst us all Together we will rise, divided we shall fall Til hate leaves our minds keep that piece on our sides The great thief’s at night, peep that piece down it’s sights People are so selfish and that’s just human nature Life is a bitch, she just mad cause I played her Wanna tie the knot but what’s a piece of paper Dancin with the devil while he ask me for a favor 13 years of riches then it’s off to meet my savior I said lifes a bitch but now I’m tryna save her
Hey @jacksammons, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'No Peace'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your vocals are nice and clear tho, keep that same mic set up! 🤙 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Seriously fire delivery, that's dope!! 🎆 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎