Hey @silasgorden,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Lizzie ππ'! π₯
Vocals are hella clear, well done! π€
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We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. β
It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! π
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @silasgorden, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Lizzie ππ'! π₯ Vocals are hella clear, well done! π€ Your bars are good, keep it up! π The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. β It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! π Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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