First short rap

Name: First short rap
Description: Why does the world always swallow me up Never gives me a chance when things get tough Just spits me out when it's had enough I'm done with this shit There's nowhere to turn I'm trapped in my mind There's no way out Nothing of the kind I'm just searching and searching For some sort of escape Some open door Or someone who's listening

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Why does the world always swallow me up Never gives me a chance when things get tough Just spits me out when it's had enough I'm done with this shit There's nowhere to turn I'm trapped in my mind There's no way out Nothing of the kind I'm just searching and searching For some sort of escape Some open door Or someone who's listening

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Panda

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4 years ago

Phreest

4 years ago

Ok I c potential

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @panda_xo, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'First short rap'! 💥 Lit bars, keep 'em comin. 🙌 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Good choice of beat! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

6 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Dark smoke

4 years ago

🔥🔥🔥🔥👑 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

✝️[KOSF]LIGHTSHOW✝️⭐️

4 years ago

#die_ar Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Alasan barry

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯