4fifthdareason

2 years ago

check me out Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Pivul lordson

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @elworm432, It's time for us to take a look at 'Just Another Lovely Day '! 💥 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! 🌠 It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! This track is super fun to listen to, love the repetition in the hook and the verses really got us in a good mood. The track's flows and rhyme schemes are simple but do the job perfectly, this is exactly the kinda track where you shouldn't overdo it. The main issue here is with the audio quality and mix, try cleanin that up next time and your track will be elevated a ton. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎