Life is hard
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•28 Feb 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @lil_dripee! Thanks for sharing 'Life is hard ' with us! 💥 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Think you could dial back the effects a little. Sometimes less is more. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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