Yo @pablocornejo.928!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'here's a little story'! π₯
Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! π§
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
The effects here don't really work with this track, try play around with others for a better fit.
Your storytelling is dope in your lyrics and keeps us engaged when listening to this track. Your flow is there and when your timing is on point you really know how to deliver your bars, you just need to maintain this throughout the whole duration of the track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @pablocornejo.928! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'here's a little story'! π₯ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! π§ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat here! πΌ The effects here don't really work with this track, try play around with others for a better fit. Your storytelling is dope in your lyrics and keeps us engaged when listening to this track. Your flow is there and when your timing is on point you really know how to deliver your bars, you just need to maintain this throughout the whole duration of the track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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