Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @sohhlmuzik32, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Watch Out'! 💥 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. 👍 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

sohhlmuzik32

3 years ago

My days aren’t the same I’m paving my lane People told me I was insane When I said I’m bringin the game Cuz I’m known to reciprocate energies Don’t bring no wack similes Thinking I’m gonna leave Please come stand next to me Watch how I rip the track Back in time when I out mapped My plan see I knew I was gonna be here Destiny doesn’t reveal itself Til it’s unfolded formed by pressure But lesser known measures added clever Sticks in ya brain Dope lines of Novocain Numbing ya state of mind frame This picture seen with eyes closed Supposed-Ly mean vets haven’t seen threats That’s as close as me My fire passion is heat I can’t be discreet it’s not in me to weep for tha weak I stick my hand out to pen the defeat Of any instrumentation that’s put to a beat It’s no shit for gangstas so I guess it won’t play in the street Looking out the window pains me to see my dreams within reach Double entendres plaguing my mind like replaying midnight at the marauders Raid to go spray these lyrical roaches That just approach us And become vultures to a culture That have no substance so go in I’m wanted On my path to greatness I can taste it