Hey @willsworld,
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You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks.
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The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them.
This track really makes the listener feel something. ๐
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐
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Hey @willsworld, We appreciate you sharing 'William Jackson - Fake emotions ' with us! ๐ฅ Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. This track really makes the listener feel something. ๐ Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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