RAYNE
RAYNE

Wake up1

Wake up1

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26 Feb 2022

wake up Dad mom needs a real back making her sad that operation that you had.... you had a heart attack and it was real BAD... yeah! Cardiac Arrest they brought you back from the dead and now I can't seem to get you out of my head but I'm glad you're laying here in this bed I thought we'd be sitting at your viewing instead the stupid motherfukers didn't know what they were doing yeah that's right I hope they heard what the fuck I said they were supposed to flip that hip real quick rewrite tha script give it a zip get you back on your bike for another road trip Daytona strip well equipped enuff 2 head Sturgis again bad motherfuker sticker on your lid military training martial arts Zen the wrong step in your direction could meet a deadly end somewhere down the line you mind begin to expand you were building stuff building up cross the land from the Carolina and forgotten Eagles land South toward the Florida Sands you build hot badder than the devil hands used to watch you race him just to let him win so you turn around just 2 face him again.... and I'm sorry for all the things I should not have said I didn't mean it in a take it all back this cant be the end I hope that you can hear me but if you can't I press send again because we did things that no one else ever did I'll never forget those days as long as I live and I know it's not something that you can understand but for your information playing in the band is like a bike without a kickstand I got to have music in my hand or I'll just fall over into the sand I grabbed your hand and I started to pray I close my eyes and then I heard an angel say don't say goodbye son he's okay he's too q tough to die anyway then I raise my head and I said I love you Dad and what a surprise he opened his eyes and said if you're going to cry you got to step outside this ain't no funeral I'm still alive you know I love you you know I love you Dad you know I love you you're my hero dad I hope that you can hear me and if you can't I'll just press sen forget those days as long as I live

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

2 years ago

Hey @staticrayne, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Wake up1'! 💥 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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