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•26 Feb 2022
sun and moon chillen in my room thinken of my life and meanings thinking why am i realy listening why am my reapeting my life doing the same things every time alpways saying things are mine maybe i should take a second and look at the stars and stop thinking of being behind bars and how we might to mars but were so far eating candy bars and thinking about dumb things like putting a ant in a jar and how my life hasn't gone far or how ive never tried caviar or about how there might be another war but now lests just rest and look at the strars and not think of pur starts.
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Hey @thecannibalpickle, We appreciate you sharing 'stars' with us! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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