Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @melissamarquez.1384, Thank you for sharing 'mnm show' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Melissa Marquez

3 years ago

let's talk about a story can the real slim JJ please stand up we're going to have a problem here I can't even see I can't even say Latina before you heard it's that he said she say thing I'm more like a hoarder any more should we say go to s***I'm Eminem the best woman ever alive you know the light the shine I'm at the camp jubilee I take you out to jelly bees yeah you want to see me or you want to be me yeah I got something more like nursery rhymes one word at a time as cursed as these times the second test positive on the other end for the coronavirus cut it shut it give me a call me why s*** on me it's bloody bloody Mary on the rocks Melissa's on top and that he did not I'm over here number one spot number two is not a winner and3 nobody remember I'm cold like I'm cold here more like tember burrr or temper I got to control this is Mike stay thirsty my friends I can't see I need my lens oh you send me kisses and letters you want to send no need to call a pen to pretend I'm as real as the holyfield deal doing it cutting nobody's ear off I'm ready to say I'm off so sick I didn't need to have to cough because I'm on it or own it you're Melissa says yeah clean this rug this put it under the dirt is going to Rose going to flirt I'll tell you what I'm worth in my skirt in the mini skirts yeah tell me what I'm worth I'm since birth I was torn you know 2 im1 did you know I am the blues you you got the flu oh yes my brothers were here they were the same meo meoww mew it means meow meow I'll scratch scratch on my back back and you're welcome back running spinning gun and shining what you going to do when you run it's going to get tired and weary then you're going to call this is headed to the puente hills Mall feeling 9 ft tall where they made back to the Future first take a tic tac take two steps back you don't know me but my name is Melissa I thought you missed her okay oh and no it's not okay don't you look at my eyes I'm headed back to the pot roast to look in these eyes and it's over game over now let me slide into gear and get into gear real fast give Melissa you going to feel this afternoon if you don't like it dump it if you like it buy it if you don't want to try it don't buy it if you like it buy it I don't know words if it makes sense in a riot or do you want to ride it it rides gee if it hurts like a kitten or more like thinking a slam dunking Jordan style making a swisher pull me some shots of this liquor bloody Mary pretty scary like Jason yeah my s***'s hasten racing my adrenaline's kicking in and when she hits the fan man f*** it hits the fan and now Melissa saying what do I got to do man it happened so fast based on a true story The mcwe double OG good on AKA The chosen One I should be soaring like I should higher than a falcon touring like a pringle puppy ass like a pimple if this is simple I paint a picture I'm a star I'm like an addition and feeling the bunny out the hat and in fact they're in fact yeah I'm just having some fun in the sun that in some words out ready to sprout my flower I got some pallets a gift looking at me done yep Melissa just call me human on your PC more like coming home like it's on me I Love Lucy Ricky hi you drop me crazy I go back Cuba or should I dance like Zumba I'm doing this song My God trying to release this tumor is just a sense of humor as long as I'm saying or using any of my energy and it's going to the positivity like a static erratic I like a magnet I got to have it and every color I'm rolling like a thunder yeah when you see me I'll be rolling like a thunder and when you see me I'll be rolling like it's lightning zap you like a f****** like a fly with bugging f****** stepping you like a slug like a thug that the speakers believe they'd be ready when my God's coming as fast as the blink of an eye as fast as the trumpet sound on any type of thunder on my demons that come down under Satan's going down under yeah we're already assassin we're like the wolves in the night for like the f****** sharks in the tank you're like a f****** mustang in the sky make a wish dream big or dreams are possible make it happen yeah out of your assassins Emil tickets meal ticket that's right let the speakers bleed like Creed alarms wide open it's All about Love potion yeah stay inspired love give forgive be patient stay strong be positive that Jesus Christ be your guide your savior your lord your king and all the rest shall be added into you believe hope stay inspired Melissa is on fire fire through the ring of fire through the mouth of the Lion Jesus Christ saved me based on the born based on a true story 18 hours jet im out. I hope you like catch up.hahaha