What's up @danuzivertvevo,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'WATCHA SAY'! π₯
The rhyming is well put together. β¨
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
You're using effects in the right way! Gives your track a lil' something extra!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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