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We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @alvsex, It's time for us to take a look at 'When It Was! '! π₯ We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. This beat choice is great for you! πΌ You really showed your emotions on this, we respect the hell out of that. π Definitely a lot of potential here, the track need to be cleaned up around the edges a little, but definitely a good starting point for a great track. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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