Yo @mistagin!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'lyrical bombshell'! π₯
Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat.
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks.
Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio?
You got incredible energy in your delivery which is dope. However, be a bit mindful of your flow as sometimes throughout the song you fall off the beat. Also try improve your recording quality as your bars sound a bit too fuzzy in this mix!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @mistagin! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'lyrical bombshell'! π₯ Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Good choice of beat here! πΌ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? You got incredible energy in your delivery which is dope. However, be a bit mindful of your flow as sometimes throughout the song you fall off the beat. Also try improve your recording quality as your bars sound a bit too fuzzy in this mix! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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