Hey @riyahdholder,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ground man'! 💥
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏
Good choice of beat! 🎼
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @riyahdholder, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ground man'! 💥 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
I'm tryin tbh