Aquatic dreams

Name: Aquatic dreams
Description: just been talking to myself again...

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just been talking to myself again...

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @the_one_true_za, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Aquatic dreams'! 💥 This beat is way too loud, turn it down a lil' bit so we can hear your bars clearer. We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Za Za Ca Ca

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4 years ago

y'all be real lmk if it's trash so I can make it better I'm not soft lmao I can take some criticism

Za Za Ca Ca

Author

4 years ago

just had to let it out lmao... Hope it's somewhat good

Cato Kirin Casper

1 month ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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