What's up @the_one_true_za,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Aquatic dreams'! 💥
This beat is way too loud, turn it down a lil' bit so we can hear your bars clearer.
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌
You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏
This beat is working well for you! 🎼
We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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What's up @the_one_true_za, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Aquatic dreams'! 💥 This beat is way too loud, turn it down a lil' bit so we can hear your bars clearer. We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
y'all be real lmk if it's trash so I can make it better I'm not soft lmao I can take some criticism
just had to let it out lmao... Hope it's somewhat good
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