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Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'EveryDay Lord Go Please Walk With Me'! π₯
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Great concept, love the meaning behind this track! π€― We can really feel how much this one means to you in the way you rap!
Dope delivery too, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track!π
This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @samuelmurray, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'EveryDay Lord Go Please Walk With Me'! π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Great concept, love the meaning behind this track! π€― We can really feel how much this one means to you in the way you rap! Dope delivery too, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track!π This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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