Hey @boyipkiss,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Head Off'! π₯
Try spend more time on your lyrics to showcase your skills.
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Good effects use on this track, well done! β
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @boyipkiss, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Head Off'! π₯ Try spend more time on your lyrics to showcase your skills. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Good effects use on this track, well done! β We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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