Hey @pablocornejo.928,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to '1st case she wrote', here are our thoughts π₯
Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! π§
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! π
911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! π§¨
Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged!
Ain't no other word for it, this is a vibe. π
There's a lot to like here, the track is vibey as hell and the piano beat sounds amazing. Has that R&B twist to it that brings the smoothness. Just gotta clean up the production a little and you've got a winner.
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @pablocornejo.928, Thanks for the submission, we listened to '1st case she wrote', here are our thoughts π₯ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! π§ The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! π 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! 𧨠Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged! Ain't no other word for it, this is a vibe. π There's a lot to like here, the track is vibey as hell and the piano beat sounds amazing. Has that R&B twist to it that brings the smoothness. Just gotta clean up the production a little and you've got a winner. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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