OUTSTANDING

OUTSTANDING

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#Freestyle #Maybe_I'm Kayne_Jesus_like! #people @savage_graphichs

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Hey @alvsex! Thanks for sharing 'OUTSTANDING' with us! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Good bars here, defo works here! ๐Ÿ™Œ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. This beat choice is great for you! ๐ŸŽผ Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. Your bars are powerful and engaging and we can hear the passion behind them! However, you need to work on your recording quality as we feel the overuse of effects are making your vocals unclear and a bit too overpowering. Try work on this in your next submission! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ŸคŸ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

9 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

9 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

9 months ago

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