Ruin My Life
REBELS SLNDERMAN162 Plays
•20 Feb 2022
I wish someone would hold me so So I hold my head down low Someone come and ruin my life Someone come and ruin my life I need someone to hold on tight That someone who could be my light I need to go through my life Someone come and ruin my life Just come and look at me I'm not one to let it be No one can ruin my life I'm going to keep my stride Someone that keeps his pride I had to go through life I had to go through life No one to keep me sane I've had to go through pain That had a lot of gain I've been lied on, beat up, and pushed around I've been treated like shit But it don't faze me one bit And I have an itch That some call me a snitch But they just like to bitch So you can try to ruin my life But you won't be able to Some call me an asshole Just to make them whole And I just say fuck it Before I kick the bucket It will be on my own time I wish I had someone to love me To hold an kiss me, but no one will So come and ruin my life It won't faze me
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What's up @itsyaboiaaron, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Ruin My Life '! 💥 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! 💜 We can hear the emotion in your lyrics and thats so dope you being so open! You just need to work on your production quality as your flow is a bit off beat and your vocals sound a tad fuzzy which in turn makes them a bit unclear! We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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