broken hearted

Joi Perkins

Author

5 years ago

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Joi Perkins

Author

4 years ago

heard it cheated

Joi Perkins

Author

4 years ago

she doesn't got no bar

Joi Perkins

Author

4 years ago

and I'm talking right now

Joi Perkins

Author

4 years ago

I am her brother

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi there @joiperkins, Here's some feedback on your track 'broken hearted', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TBM"SHOTTA"

4 years ago

up Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

🏆Risky CEO E solo👑 🙏

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯