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Hey @pizzaboyq,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Butterfly'! 💥
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶
Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel.
Actually really like what you're doing here. The hook is very unique and your lyrical content is as well so great job there. Definitely don't need as much effect on your voices you think bro. You have a good voice.
We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @pizzaboyq, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Butterfly'! 💥 Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. Actually really like what you're doing here. The hook is very unique and your lyrical content is as well so great job there. Definitely don't need as much effect on your voices you think bro. You have a good voice. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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