Hey @bossmanework,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Masterpiece '! 💥
Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍
It would be cool if you switched up the flow as the track went on - this would add some versatility to your sound & could create some hype on the sections where you switch the flow! 💯Your delivery is super clean tho, this is def sounding good. 🎶
The recording is solid, everything is clear. ✔
Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Masterpiece 2022
Hey @bossmanework, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Masterpiece '! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 It would be cool if you switched up the flow as the track went on - this would add some versatility to your sound & could create some hype on the sections where you switch the flow! 💯Your delivery is super clean tho, this is def sounding good. 🎶 The recording is solid, everything is clear. ✔ Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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