Hey @bossmanework,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Masterpiece '! ๐ฅ
Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐
It would be cool if you switched up the flow as the track went on - this would add some versatility to your sound & could create some hype on the sections where you switch the flow! ๐ฏYour delivery is super clean tho, this is def sounding good. ๐ถ
The recording is solid, everything is clear. โ
Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @bossmanework, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Masterpiece '! ๐ฅ Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐ It would be cool if you switched up the flow as the track went on - this would add some versatility to your sound & could create some hype on the sections where you switch the flow! ๐ฏYour delivery is super clean tho, this is def sounding good. ๐ถ The recording is solid, everything is clear. โ Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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