Hey @ronaldhayn,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'GODS CALLING YOU'! ๐ฅ
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them.
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
how could u go wrong when u talking about GOD!! ๐ฅ๐ฅ..I'm on your side...Check me out you will see I'm on that level just different words without saying God! not ashamed but u know they don't wanna hear it so blunt that's when I come in..Fire ๐ฅ๐ฅ bro.
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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thank you for the constructive criticism, much appreciated
Hey @ronaldhayn, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'GODS CALLING YOU'! ๐ฅ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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how could u go wrong when u talking about GOD!! ๐ฅ๐ฅ..I'm on your side...Check me out you will see I'm on that level just different words without saying God! not ashamed but u know they don't wanna hear it so blunt that's when I come in..Fire ๐ฅ๐ฅ bro. Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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