Hey @ronaldhayn,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'GODS CALLING YOU'! π₯
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them.
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
how could u go wrong when u talking about GOD!! π₯π₯..I'm on your side...Check me out you will see I'm on that level just different words without saying God! not ashamed but u know they don't wanna hear it so blunt that's when I come in..Fire π₯π₯ bro.
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thank you for the constructive criticism, much appreciated
Hey @ronaldhayn, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'GODS CALLING YOU'! π₯ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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