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Welcome to our feedback of 'Loafing Asx '! π₯
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! π
Good choice of beat! πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @loafinasxtay! Welcome to our feedback of 'Loafing Asx '! π₯ The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! π Good choice of beat! πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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