Bouquet

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Talk Rap: So I’m feeling just the same Even though I’m improving my game I feel like a little boy chiming in And touching the flame 🔥 Trying to give myself a name Aiming to make my claim on fame Emotions on Valentine’s Day have to be tamed otherwise we blamed for being lame and we become ashamed. Main Chorus Sing: A cheap Bouquet 💐 flowers I did pick them myself Im weak at the knees I’ve spent hours finding the best match Of my love for you I’m just going to let you know I didn’t do this for myself You were all I ever thought of each time I passed the meadows of love Rap: Love is the burning thing in your heart You never feel like you should be too far apart But where do you start if you already have a broken heart 💔 ❤️‍🩹. who do you court? How do you sort the feelings chart? Or Shoot the arrow or bullseyes 🎯 the dart? I never really cared if they were tall or short. Some players play the sport. But I’m just more worried if when I laugh I snort or fart 💨 . I want to work this out like a piece of art. I’m going after you because you’re smart and you know I can be your daddy and fill up your 🛒 shopping cart. Pressure, challenges me because I treasure the weather and never measure the pleasure you offer me. Whisper: I’d tickle you with feathers 🪶. Sing: Box of chocolates 🍫 Boxing 🥊 my pockets Lost my wallet down the way It was February, but now it seems it is May This thing that I thought was love Was just a fly away dove 🕊 It’s way above my pay 💰 grade I’ve been played and delayed But I’ve got one thing to say I’ve got…

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Devin Baker

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4 years ago

$EOP$

4 years ago

Nice bro but the voice needs some work Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: On point 🎯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @purpleduck, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Bouquet '! 💥 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. You might want to try one of our Masterclasses for your next track. They come with ready made lyrics and demos from some of the best rappers on the app. This track needs quite a bit of work, the vocals sound off beat and the recording quality is really taking away the potential from this track. Try fix this up if you can in your next submission. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

LilShawty

4 years ago

wow

Samsondew

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Dope 🔥

🥶91, 😈💀 style 🔥🐐

4 years ago

🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥