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Hey @blurache!
Thanks for sharing 'lessons ' with us! ๐ฅ
Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat.
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Your rhyming is tight. โจ
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. ๐ผ
Nice use of effects, it really adds to the track. โญ
You've got a ton of swagger in that delivery for real, you're talking that talk and bringing a ton of charisma. Smooth flows as well, the laid back and effortless delivery works really well. A little more flow variety would have been dope to hear, and this track would really benefit from a hook! It's just a little short.
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. ๐ค
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช
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YOO, this is fire bro, you got a future ๐๐ถ๐ฅ I made a new song, and in 15 years old so can you also give me feedback? thanks ๐๐ถ๐ฅ๐ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Hey @blurache! Thanks for sharing 'lessons ' with us! ๐ฅ Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Your rhyming is tight. โจ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! The beat is dope and really works for this track. ๐ผ Nice use of effects, it really adds to the track. โญ You've got a ton of swagger in that delivery for real, you're talking that talk and bringing a ton of charisma. Smooth flows as well, the laid back and effortless delivery works really well. A little more flow variety would have been dope to hear, and this track would really benefit from a hook! It's just a little short. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. ๐ค Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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