Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @billyfarmer.6737198! Welcome to our feedback of 'you are dead'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Billy Farmer

3 years ago

yeah yeah yeah come so I swap let me get my gun I clock it's wrote it it's loaded I'm done you're wrong you hit me you die you chase me you die you smack me you're whacked the dirt you're buried shoot me shoot you first don't try me you'll get released because I'll shoot you how you supposed to steal my money when you'll be dead cuz I'm going to shoot you in the head before your back I'm going to shoot you I'm going to bury you you will never be alive so how you going to take my money when you're dead so what are you going to do about it trapping on the talking talk I'll walk you down to fall asleep walk you down walk you down walk you down yeah that's how I work around here .