whirlwind

CJohn Arellano

Author

4 years ago

65grams

CJohn Arellano

Author

4 years ago

thank you so much and appreciate your input I'm very new at this I'm having a great time and I sure will work at it hard thank you again

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @cjohnarellano.6710530, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'whirlwind'! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. Try listen back to your rap and see if you can get your bars to have better timing with the beat. The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Why don't you hop on a Masterclass next to really start honing your skills! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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