What's up @gpevo,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Greatest Gift'! π₯
You got great bars here. π
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
Good choice of beat! πΌ
The effects are nicely done, keep it up. β
This track really makes the listener feel something. π
You got talent for sure, the bars are so hard hitting and the flow is so close to being perfect you only fall off the beat a couple times! You got great production, we just need you to get back into that studio and make a few tweaks because your potential is limitless!
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @gpevo, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Greatest Gift'! π₯ You got great bars here. π Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good choice of beat! πΌ The effects are nicely done, keep it up. β This track really makes the listener feel something. π You got talent for sure, the bars are so hard hitting and the flow is so close to being perfect you only fall off the beat a couple times! You got great production, we just need you to get back into that studio and make a few tweaks because your potential is limitless! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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