What's up @jaydenwilliams.6817293,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'first in life '! 💥
Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic?
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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What's up @jaydenwilliams.6817293, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'first in life '! 💥 Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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