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Hey @toothsimpson905,
We're gonna review your track 'Traction'. Let's get it!
The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit?
We like the bars, well written!
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π
This beat is working well for you! πΌ
Damn this one has soo much potential. The way you switch from hype bars to a melodic flow and back shows how versatile you are. You got talent, and the lyrics in this track highlight this. We just think you need to make a couple of tweaks to you production as your vocals are a tad bit loud compared to the beat.
You've got serious skills, great work! π₯
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @toothsimpson905, We're gonna review your track 'Traction'. Let's get it! The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit? We like the bars, well written! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π This beat is working well for you! πΌ Damn this one has soo much potential. The way you switch from hype bars to a melodic flow and back shows how versatile you are. You got talent, and the lyrics in this track highlight this. We just think you need to make a couple of tweaks to you production as your vocals are a tad bit loud compared to the beat. You've got serious skills, great work! π₯ We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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