Hey @devanruthelford,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'legend made '! π₯
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π
Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @devanruthelford, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'legend made '! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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