Yo @waze9!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Waze9, tick tock'! π₯
The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit?
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this.
The flow is the area that needs work. I think you got good emphasis on words and tone and emotion, just slow down (you can still rhyme fast doing this you just wanna fit the beat)
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @waze9! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Waze9, tick tock'! π₯ The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit? You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. The flow is the area that needs work. I think you got good emphasis on words and tone and emotion, just slow down (you can still rhyme fast doing this you just wanna fit the beat) You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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