first ever
Jaiden Rosario5 Plays
•03 Feb 2022
Candle's burnin', glasses are chilled And soon she'll be by Hope and pray she'll say that she's willing To give us another try And if all these plans I made Don't melt the lady's heart I'll put on the old 45 Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times Maybe the old lines will sound new Maybe she'll lay her head on my shoulder And maybe old feelings will come through Maybe we'll start to cry And wonder why we ever walked away Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times And make her wanna stay It's been too long without seeing her face light up When I come home It's been too many hours I've waited Staring at the phone Sweet old songs, I'm countin' on you Bring her back to me I'm tired of listening alone Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times Maybe the old lines will sound new Maybe she'll lay her head on my shoulder And maybe old feelings will come through Maybe we'll start to cry And wonder why we ever walked away Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times And make her wanna stay And make her wanna stay, oh baby And make her wanna stay
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Hey @jaidenrosario, We're gonna review your track 'first ever'. Let's get it! Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Candle's burnin', glasses are chilled And soon she'll be by Hope and pray she'll say that she's willing To give us another try And if all these plans I made Don't melt the lady's heart I'll put on the old 45 Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times Maybe the old lines will sound new Maybe she'll lay her head on my shoulder And maybe old feelings will come through Maybe we'll start to cry And wonder why we ever walked away Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times And make her wanna stay It's been too long without seeing her face light up When I come home It's been too many hours I've waited Staring at the phone Sweet old songs, I'm countin' on you Bring her back to me I'm tired of listening alone Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times Maybe the old lines will sound new Maybe she'll lay her head on my shoulder And maybe old feelings will come through Maybe we'll start to cry And wonder why we ever walked away Maybe the old songs Will bring back the old times And make her wanna stay And make her wanna stay, oh baby And make her wanna stay
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