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ChorusSing: ooh mama, you should have never let him in. You could’ve saved yourself from the pain that exist everywhere. I thought it was in plain sight, but it doesn’t serve me right. No matter what is said. Rap: Keep it on callin’ killin’ And I’m feeling in the ceiling And I really want to know what your doing In thrill n’ I text you, you know Perplex you, open the Fuck you Shut on the on nose I should’ve known Chilly Willy Ellie Ellie Ellie Tilting Can you see my arm? My arm is shady, uh huh Should I go? This is shitty ain’t it. This ain’t it, I want to go. Beauty, beauty, beauty Do it, Boo it, Blue it Ya teeth got to know Faster: One talisman to stop all the shenanigans One baptism to stop all the Vigilantism Too much violence door to door I keep the abusers in a jar It stops them coming back from the bar, Popping chins and the tiniest violins 🎻… Begin to play when the drunken stupor hope he doesn’t raise up a shooter Deep and dirty rap: No matter what’s said you are Climbing up off the ground Silence is the most deafening sound Bliss isn’t getting hit, making it thru the thin and thick, the pain of it even when sick or on the trip for escape somehow. Property of a man ain’t no way to live Waiting for a paycheck at the end of the week isn’t going change things when you are so weak that you can’t barely bend your knees. Begging please, please, please, I need more please. 2nd Chorus: I need more time, I need more understanding, I need more money she screams please! Rap: One fact is That it never seems to end When the change never really seems to begin and just is talked about here and then
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ChorusSing: ooh mama, you should have never let him in. You could’ve saved yourself from the pain that exist everywhere. I thought it was in plain sight, but it doesn’t serve me right. No matter what is said. Rap: Keep it on callin’ killin’ And I’m feeling in the ceiling And I really want to know what your doing In thrill n’ I text you, you know Perplex you, open the Fuck you Shut on the on nose I should’ve known Chilly Willy Ellie Ellie Ellie Tilting Can you see my arm? My arm is shady, uh huh Should I go? This is shitty ain’t it. This ain’t it, I want to go. Beauty, beauty, beauty Do it, Boo it, Blue it Ya teeth got to know Faster: One talisman to stop all the shenanigans One baptism to stop all the Vigilantism Too much violence door to door I keep the abusers in a jar It stops them coming back from the bar, Popping chins and the tiniest violins 🎻… Begin to play when the drunken stupor hope he doesn’t raise up a shooter Deep and dirty rap: No matter what’s said you are Climbing up off the ground Silence is the most deafening sound Bliss isn’t getting hit, making it thru the thin and thick, the pain of it even when sick or on the trip for escape somehow. Property of a man ain’t no way to live Waiting for a paycheck at the end of the week isn’t going change things when you are so weak that you can’t barely bend your knees. Begging please, please, please, I need more please. 2nd Chorus: I need more time, I need more understanding, I need more money she screams please! Rap: One fact is That it never seems to end When the change never really seems to begin and just is talked about here and then
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Hi there @purpleduck, Here's some feedback on your track 'Scream (16:14:52)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Ngl fam this flow is crazy when you switch it up. In some areas the delivery could use some improving but all in due time fam. Keep consistently recording and listening honestly to your stuff and you'll catch the minor things. Great work. Keep it up! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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