Hi @bobbyklein.3769!
Welcome to our feedback of 'wide awake'! π₯
Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ
Would turn the vocals down just a bit on this cus they overpowring the beat a bit. You want a nice blend but you're about there. The flow is dope here tho. Good storytelling and concept.
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @bobbyklein.3769! Welcome to our feedback of 'wide awake'! π₯ Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Would turn the vocals down just a bit on this cus they overpowring the beat a bit. You want a nice blend but you're about there. The flow is dope here tho. Good storytelling and concept. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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