Hey @michael83,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Find Dat Bread', here are our thoughts π₯
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Such clear vocals on this one, keep it up! π€
Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
Love the throwback beat. You got a good bounce on it. Great voice. The only think we'd suggest is turning your voice up in the mix a bit.
We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @michael83, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Find Dat Bread', here are our thoughts π₯ Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Such clear vocals on this one, keep it up! π€ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ Love the throwback beat. You got a good bounce on it. Great voice. The only think we'd suggest is turning your voice up in the mix a bit. We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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