hi

grayson1996

Author

4 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @grayson1996! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'hi'! 💥 We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎