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girl I wasn't perfect I wish that I could take it back I know I did some shit girl and I know that I can't take it back, I was out here trappin tryna give u sum I never had my feelings turned to love for u a vision that I never had, tryna be the best dad to my children thought I'd never have a soul to call my own and hope to hold to make it better fo, tryna fight these demons with a angel on my shoulder but my heart keep getting colder cause my days is getting shorter,

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4 years ago

girl I wasn't perfect I wish that I could take it back I know I did some shit girl and I know that I can't take it back, I was out here trappin tryna give u sum I never had my feelings turned to love for u a vision that I never had, tryna be the best dad to my children thought I'd never have a soul to call my own and hope to hold to make it better fo, tryna fight these demons with a angel on my shoulder but my heart keep getting colder cause my days is getting shorter,

4 years ago

Hi @robertoroman! Welcome to our feedback of 'beto best'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ The track has meaning. 👍 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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