Yblo😬
Yblo😬

end of the story

end of the story

164 Plays

27 Jan 2022

end of the story, got a bag and i did it for glory, told my hater that I'm not sorry, I smoke till my vision real blurry, got tha 30 on me like curry, I was born in tha gully it was ugly, thank God I made it feeling lucky, im from tha drirt an it got real muddy, when it cum to tha streets, shit it can get touchy, I remember I was really scrubby, back then nobody dnt love me, I was down Bad need recovery, now everytime u see her I'm In her tummy, shutout to rap fame thy know how I'm coming

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2 years ago

yo rapfame we goin to look back and be like,you remember this one#rapfameona1000

2 years ago

Hey @yblo, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'end of the story'! 💥 Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! 🌠 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

end of the story, got a bag and i did it for glory, told my hater that I'm not sorry, I smoke till my vision real blurry, got tha 30 on me like curry, I was born in tha gully it was ugly, thank God I made it feeling lucky, im from tha drirt an it got real muddy, when it cum to tha streets, shit it can get touchy, I remember I was really scrubby, back then nobody dnt love me, I was down Bad need recovery, now everytime u see her I'm In her tummy, shutout to rap fame thy know how I'm coming

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