thanks RAP FAME Family for the MOTIVATION & Luv I'm not in a thousand studio on recording off my new phone and headphones so work with me I'll clear it up the best way I can and mix it up so I can get my message out to y'all Stay Tuned >>YouTube black st9 BerzerK subscribe & like video I recorded and edited all myself BIG BIG THANKS I'ma one man band #MR.DARX÷SIDE
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Hey @artwrld.6707932,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'DARK SIDE ME'! 💥
Awesome narrative, keep up the amazing storytelling! 🤯 Keep working at your freestyling, it's a tough to skill to master but you will get there if you keep workin'.
Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow.
Why don't you hop on a Masterclass next to really start honing your skills!
Definitely love your use of ad-libs on here fam! Try to spend more time writing lyrics next time. The effects are def there. The track has character. Tighten up that flow and you'll be good!
We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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thanks RAP FAME Family for the MOTIVATION & Luv I'm not in a thousand studio on recording off my new phone and headphones so work with me I'll clear it up the best way I can and mix it up so I can get my message out to y'all Stay Tuned >>YouTube black st9 BerzerK subscribe & like video I recorded and edited all myself BIG BIG THANKS I'ma one man band #MR.DARX÷SIDE 💪 🦾 💀
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Hey @artwrld.6707932, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'DARK SIDE ME'! 💥 Awesome narrative, keep up the amazing storytelling! 🤯 Keep working at your freestyling, it's a tough to skill to master but you will get there if you keep workin'. Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. Why don't you hop on a Masterclass next to really start honing your skills! Definitely love your use of ad-libs on here fam! Try to spend more time writing lyrics next time. The effects are def there. The track has character. Tighten up that flow and you'll be good! We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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