What's up @chiraq803,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Be Right'! ๐ฅ
Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. ๐ง
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect.
Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'!
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! ๐ถ You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! ๐
You picked the perfect beat for this one, this sounds great. ๐งจ
You're using effects in the right way! Gives your track a lil' something extra!
It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! ๐
Damnn, this is something. We're real impressed with your talent. ๐ฅ
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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What's up @chiraq803, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Be Right'! ๐ฅ Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. ๐ง Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! ๐ถ You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! ๐ You picked the perfect beat for this one, this sounds great. ๐งจ You're using effects in the right way! Gives your track a lil' something extra! It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! ๐ Damnn, this is something. We're real impressed with your talent. ๐ฅ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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